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results from the questionnaires lead me to thinking about the content and
design of my pieces. I received good, positive feedback, but the works I ended
up making just do not seem like what I would choose to make if given complete
freedom with direction. I liked using the cardboard for the landscape, because
it gave a rougher look, especially around the edges. It made it easier to blend
the colors as well, but once I completed it I did not like the results as much.
For the social sciences project, I used mostly torn up pieces from found
magazines as the background. I like the look and texture that it made, although
regarding the size of the piece, I am still unsure how I should have cropped
it. I made it close to the elements within, because I did not want too much
negative, white space from the background. The problem with doing that is it
seems too small. In drawing Marilyn’s portrait, I am pleased with how it turned
out. If I had more time I would have perfected her jaw line and spent more time
on the details of her hair to look more realistic. I may continue on the
Marilyn piece and experiment with any possible cropping and sketch details to
make it better. Comparing both the landscape and the social science piece, what
is most noticeable is my use of color as the dominating elements. The landscape
is composed of many bright colors and one dark, and the Marilyn piece is
primarily black and white with contrasting red on certain places. I do like
using color in works, as is obvious in both. In planning the landscape, I wanted
to represent my attitude towards my situation in life at the moment. The ground
is dark, as the present can be difficult to view as good. The sky is bright
with a sunrise, like looking forward, or up, into an ideal future that is
aspired. For the Marilyn piece, my plan was to make a small commentary on
female body image as it is influenced by the media. Marilyn Monroe is an iconic
beauty image, although the point of the piece is to say that if there is exact
and definite beauty, no one would fit the model.
Good comparison, I like the realization that the works look nothing like what you would expect to do if left on your own. I'm curious now.....:)
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